Justin Taylor - Flings - Stories

I watched him and ate the clementines. Peels piled up on the roof all around me, their white innards shining even brighter than their glowing skins. A wind rose and the peels rolled down the roof faces, falling away into the void below, an endless empty darkness that had followed me, yawning open where the ground had been. Shocked by the sight, I scrambled toward the relative safety of the middle of the roof and watched the color drain out of the trees. Everything was coming undone. Isaac had the basketball court and I had the library roof and we were shipwreck survivors on bobbing planks, stuck where we were until whatever had begun was finished and the process reversed itself. What had been unwritten would be rewritten, the shattered world made whole again. Wouldn’t it? I told myself it must be and wanted to tell Isaac — who, I realized, had no idea that any of this was happening — but he was too far away to hear me no matter how loudly I cried out to him, no matter what I might have meant to say.

Ellen is at her internship with the film festival and Scott is in their gravel driveway, loading his half of everything they own into the Jetta. The small stones crunching beneath his sneakers are the same color as the three o’clock sky. He’s composing the Dear John in his head while he packs the car, but he can’t seem to get it right — not that it can be got right, ditching her like this, but shouldn’t there be a way to make it less bad? He carries crates of records, a Camel Light between his lips, sweat streaking down his naked scalp. The Jetta is midnight blue and his own, though he and Ellen share it; usually he drops her off in the morning, then picks her up around four thirty, five. Today, she’s going to take the bus home, ostensibly so that Scott can drive out to the Costco by the airport.

Why is he leaving? Tough to say. From the moment they decided to move to Portland together, he’d known that this evil seed was planted in his heart. He could have, maybe should have, said no when she asked him to come with her, but they’d graduated; there was no reason to stick around their college town in Ohio, and he certainly wasn’t going back to Long Island, so — the Great Northwest. Why not? Perhaps he had believed that the feeling would pass. The seed would fail to blossom or the fruit would wither on the vine. Last night they had this talk about adopting a dog — curled up on the couch, they weighed the relative merits of mutts versus purebreds — and suddenly he could see their life together, all mapped out: the proposal and the wedding and the grades the kids would be in when the dog died of old age. Now here he is, twelve hours later, gut-sick and elated, sweaty and sore-armed, all his clothes in duffels and Hefty bags.

It’s not too late to call this off. He can unload the car, get a bottle of Côtes du Rhône uncorked and into the decanter. He can get everything back in its right place if he’s quick. He can come up with a reason that he never made it to Costco. He can put a knife through the front left tire of his car. He can kiss Ellen when she walks through the door.

He shoves a last duffel in on top of his vinyl, then struggles the trunk shut. What else does he even own? His turntables and headphones, his laptop, its power cord and the cord for his cell phone, a few pairs of shoes. That stuff can all go in the backseat. He’ll throw a winter coat over the DJ gear so that it won’t get stolen in some rest-stop parking lot. The plan is to drive to his sister Priscilla’s place in LA. The trip will take two days if he pushes himself, three if he goes easy. Priscilla, who is four years older, is married to an entertainment lawyer. They have a house in Silver Lake that seems to be made entirely of windows, with a sandy backyard and two spare rooms; one of these is empty and the other contains a blue foldout couch. Scott assumes that the empty room is earmarked for a child but thinks of the other as his, though he knows the house only from photographs posted online. He’ll probably call them from the road tonight or tomorrow morning. Or maybe he’ll just show up.

Now he’s standing in his soon-to-be-former bedroom, pushing drawers back in, shutting the closet door, smoothing the top sheet. He doesn’t want Ellen to think there’s been a burglary or, worse, that he’s had another woman in the bed. He wishes that he could somehow be there to explain things to her when she comes home — an absurd thought, but it reminds him that he still hasn’t written the note.

He tears a piece of paper off the yellow pad that they keep on the counter for their shopping lists. He writes, “I wasn’t ready and am so sorry but swear this will have been the right thing for us.” Signs his name way down at the bottom in swift cursive, like he does to endorse checks. Leaves himself space to go back and add “Love” as his closing, but isn’t sure whether he should. He knows that he’s giving up his right to use that word with regard to Ellen, but doesn’t know whether that means that he ought to use it this one last time or if the forfeiture has already taken place.

If not “Love,” then what?

But just because there’s room for a closing doesn’t mean there has to be a closing. He didn’t begin with a salutation, after all. “Dear Ellen”—how absurd would that be? The letter is held on the table by their little brown pepper mill. Whatever happens next is his fault but not his problem. He may never even know about it, whatever “it” will turn out to have been.

Scott locks the front door. His bowels are twisted in hot knots but he doesn’t have to go to the bathroom. Indeed, he’s eaten nothing but cigarette smoke all day. He plugs his iPod into the dashboard. He knows that it’s stupid to soundtrack his own life by picking a song “for the moment,” but can’t help himself. Puts on Derek and the Dominos’ “Key to the Highway,” rolls all his windows down, shuts his cell phone off and tosses it in the glove box, lights a cigarette, puts the car into gear, and then, sobbing freely, inaugurates his long ride south.

Scott drives out of Portland half expecting to crash on the highway. He won’t cause the accident but he will deserve to suffer it. He imagines how it will go: a flash or a swerve, a drop in his gut, like when an elevator hiccups, then jump cut — waking up alone in a sunny hospital room or a wailing ambulance or somehow back in Ellen’s arms in a body cast or even shipped home to a grave beside his grandparents at New Montefiore, in West Babylon. He believes that the universe will charge him with his crime against Ellen, will confirm to him the value of his actions by making him pay dearly for having taken them. This strikes him as a quintessentially Jewish sentiment. He pounds the steering wheel with the heel of his hand and cries out, “Fuck your ancient law!”

Six hours later, the state line safely behind him, he stops for the night in Yreka — a depressing old mining town in the high beautiful woods near Klamath National Forest. The phone stays off and in the glove box. At the Black Bear Diner he orders the Joe’s Hobo Omelette — ham, bacon, and sausage. Fuck your ancient law . The next morning, he gets up, checks out of the Econo Lodge, goes back to the Black Bear, sits in the same seat as the day before, orders the same omelette plus coffee, then gets back on I-5. He figures he’ll drive as far as Sacramento, but then the prospect of an evening in that city seems so grim that he takes the 505 to San Francisco, where he uses the family credit card to check into the Omni Hotel.

The Omni has an air of beleaguered elegance: faded crimson carpets roll down scuffed marble stairs into a lobby full of wing chairs; waxed apples brown in a bronze bowl on a sideboard by the elevators. Scott drowns himself in HBO and room service. He showers with the bathroom door open, eats the five-dollar chocolate bar from the minifridge. Through the smoke coat on his tongue, the taste of the bittersweet confection is like glimpsing a hooded figure through swirling fog.