Melanie Thon - Meteors in August

When Lyla reached the shore, she pulled the blanket from Bo’s outstretched arms and wrapped it around herself. She was proud and separate, too holy for anyone to touch, the first among us to be baptized a second time, in the spirit. And she who had never been more pure than anyone meant to hold this moment close as long as she could.

For weeks after that night I didn’t see Lyla rub up against any of the men in her casual, accidental way. She stopped wearing red and started going door to door, witnessing. She won no converts, but Freda Graves praised her for her courage and told us the true test was to persist even in the face of defeat. When I first met Lyla, she was always busting into Amen and Sweet Jesus . She’d sing it out, jumping to her feet and shaking the floor to keep her sides from splitting with the joy. The river had truly changed her. Once, she had danced and shouted for God; now she shuffled. Her serenity gave me hope. I might still be saved.

Lyla Leona was born again, but she kept her old room at the boardinghouse. Now that the days were warm, the long porch was crowded with old men, some who lived there, some who didn’t. They smoked pipes and played cribbage. Lyla held her head high when she moved among them, but they failed to see her new dignity. They wheezed and whistled; they said, “Lyla honey, I got ten dollars if you got ten minutes.” She told us she ignored their offers, but they were hard of hearing and weren’t surprised by silence.

Mrs. Graves kept reminding us how the devil loved attention, and every Tuesday night we gave him that. We had to be warned before we prayed. Over and over she told us: the closer you are to God, the more the devil wants you. This made no sense to me. I thought of the devil as having every bad trait imaginable, laziness high among them. I thought, Why does he bother with people who are hard to trap when there are so many of us lingering near the borderline ready to be snatched?

The story that scared me the most was the one about Freda Graves’s daughter. The devil came after her in a serious way. She was pregnant, and Mrs. Graves was going to be a grandmother for the first time. Just days before the baby was due, Freda Graves heard a crackle of laughter. She felt a flash of heat in her brain. For a moment she went blind; then a voice inside her own head told her she’d have a surprise when she saw her grandchild.

The devil had spoken to her. She knew him. She didn’t pray to God to change things; He alone chose the time and place for miracles. No, Freda Graves was humble. If there was something wrong with the baby, she prayed to be strong enough to bear her trial.

After three days of prayer the child was born. A valve in her tiny heart had not closed, and she couldn’t breathe without a tube stuck in a hole the doctor cut in her throat. She had a cleft palate and low, unformed ears, shaped in the simple whorls of tiny shells. Oh, the little monster, well loved and taken back to Heaven in a week, she was born to test the fortitude of Freda Graves, a human sacrifice for the soul of another, Jesus born again and again so that we might be spared.

Freda prayed to understand, and God gave her an answer in the night. The child was too dear for earth, the beautiful soul in her ugly body too precious, and God had called her back to be with Him.

I wondered why God let Mrs. Graves’s daughter carry this child for nine months. He must have known all along that her soul was too pure for this world. Why didn’t He give the woman one of those pretty babies with an imperfect soul and hang on to what He wanted? The wooden Jesus writhed on his cross in the shadows of the bookshelf. I wanted to ask him to explain the reason we had to suffer, the reason he had to die. I didn’t know who to fear more — a careless God or a malicious devil.

I needed a glimpse of the Lord’s plan, so I came to Freda Graves’s house every Tuesday night, hoping to find a way to talk with Him. But I held back my paltry confessions. My temptations were pitiful things: the strawberries in Joanna Foot’s garden, a dream about Zack Holler, the memory of Gwen’s kiss in the tree house, my knowledge of my parents’ lives.

I believed I was still too far from God for the devil to have any serious interest in me, but Freda Graves thought otherwise. My silence meant I hid my sins. This was a fool’s crime; you can’t deceive the Lord. My redemption depended on Freda Graves, and she intended to have her glory. On the last Tuesday in June she headed straight for my sullied soul.

Her living room was darker than usual, the windows shut tight and locked. I thought Mrs. Graves wanted to make a point about hell, about gloom and heat and how much of it we could bear before we cried out. I vowed to be the last to complain, but I was worried about some of the others. Minnie Hathaway sat next to me on the sofa. Her head kept rolling back. She tugged at her gloves but wouldn’t take them off. I saw her swollen joints through the thin cloth. Her hands were crippled by arthritis. She was ashamed. All those years I thought she wore white gloves to look like a lady. Now I saw the truth. That was happening to me too much lately.

“One among us is afraid to give herself to God,” Freda said. “We must help her.” I thought of poor Minnie. “The dark one works in many ways. He squats in our hearts. He gives us doubt and keeps us from speaking to our Lord. He tells us our prayers are selfish and that the Father will not listen to our puling pleas. The devil wants to keep you for himself. Silence is the devil’s language. God longs to hear our voices raised to Him in exaltation. You will speak, my child. You will speak in the tongue God has chosen for you alone. Come to me, Elizabeth Macon .”

The sound of my name jolted my heart into an extra beat. No one called me Elizabeth.

“Come forward, girl,” said Mrs. Graves. I had to obey, but I slouched toward my redemption, certain I wasn’t ready to be saved.

“Gather around, all of you, gather around our child who is afraid to speak to the God who loves her. Help her open her heart and her mouth to Him. This lost lamb needs our guidance, needs our hands on her. Lie down, Elizabeth, here on the floor before me.”

The carpet was prickly, stiff with wine that had spilled and dried. I stretched out in front of those strangers who told their secrets to God while we stood witness. I laid myself before them and let them encircle me.

“Do not be afraid. God has given each one of us a language all our own, a language only He can understand. You cannot say the wrong words if you allow the spirit to enter you. Free His tongue to speak in you. Let your words flow like a river into the bottomless lake of God’s great mind. Your heart will know the truth. Do not try to understand. Trust the word of God, and He will raise you in His mighty arms. The Lord will ravish you with sweetness.”

I was willing to let her have her way because I still didn’t believe that anyone, not even Freda Graves, could make me speak in a language I didn’t know. If she failed, I’d be free. I could stop hoping for salvation. I could try to accept my weaknesses and learn to live with my desires.

They laid hands on me, all of them, as they’d done to Bo Effinger the night I watched at the window. Minnie had her hands on my shoulder, and she leaned close enough for me to catch a good whiff of her whiskey breath. No wonder she suffered from the heat. I hoped Freda Graves wouldn’t smell what I smelled. I was afraid of how she might punish Minnie.

Mrs. Graves touched my head. On my right thigh, Elliot Foot’s fingers burned through my dress. The man was still in torment. His hands exposed his guilt. Bo Effinger spread his palms across my stomach.

I didn’t have to raise my head to see who touched me. Myron’s hands gripped my left ankle so tight I thought my foot would go numb. Lyla Leona’s soft fingers rested on my hipbone. She rubbed me in a distracted, dreamy way. She led a celibate life but hadn’t lost her sense for pleasure. Joanna Foot poked at my knee, and the twins sat arm in arm at my side. For weeks I’d thought of these people as well-acquainted strangers, but now I realized I knew them all from their fingertips to their souls.