Denise Mina - Deception aka Sanctum

Box 2 Document 9 Videotape

PROGRAM 1: HOME MOVIE 1 3/1/98 3:18 P.M.

As it started, the image of a gray little office was tugged down the screen in jagged horizontal lines. Finally it resolved itself and, offscreen, Harvey Tucker says, “Brilliant.”

I made extensive notes as I watched.

The room looks small and ugly. There is a shelf of books on the far wall above a metal desk. I can’t actually read the titles, but I recognize the spines of some of the books and can see Susie’s sports bag under the desk. This is her office, but I’ve never seen inside because she works in a secure institution. It is small and gray and low. Susie taped interviews with some of her patients, I remember. She brought the prison’s camcorder home to film Margie’s first Christmas. On one of the bookshelves, up high near the top of the wall, a tiny bright glint catches my eye. It is her wedding ring. The design we got was quite chunky, and she takes it off to work, just like I do when I’m typing things up here. That’s how she lost it. She told security she went to put it back on again after typing a report and found it gone.

In the center of the static shot is a black plastic armchair with a low seat and wooden arms. Donna is sitting in it, looking nervously to the right of the camera, banging her knees together, a little I-want-to-please-you smile on her heavily made-up face. Her hair is thick, pulled loosely up in a ponytail at the crown.

In front of Donna’s feet, on the floor, there is a long bright rectangle of sunlight. It is coming from a window behind the camera. The shadow from the window is so crisp that the four vertical bars can clearly be seen and I can make out the sharp shadow of someone’s head and torso. (I assume it is Tucker but later realize it is Susie.)

It’s painful to look at Donna, knowing she’s lying dead somewhere, her voluptuous little body decomposing, waiting to be found. She seems so young and plump and ripe. She is dressed in a button-up black polka-dot dress with a scoop neck and a pair of clunky white court shoes. You don’t really get a sense of her personality in static photos, but she is fidgety and shyer than she seemed in interviews. She covers her mouth when she smiles, which is often, and pulls her dark hair over her face. At one stage I can see her pull the edge of her hair toward her mouth as if she’s going to start chewing it like a small girl. Then she remembers that she mustn’t do that and tucks it away. Her skin is very pink.

“Hi, Donna,” says Susie, and I can hear that she’s smiling.

Donna grins back at her. “Hiya.” She lifts her hand in a little wave, feels embarrassed about the gesture, and then covers her mouth and giggles as though she has done something wrong.

“Now,” says Susie, “if at any point you feel uncomfortable with this, we want you to say so, okay?”

Donna nods.

Tucker emphasizes the point. “Yes. Any time you want us to stop filming, we will.”

“’Kay.”

She smiles at him, and I can hear in his voice that he is smiling back as he adds, “All you have to do is say so.”

Tucker is not delineated in the shadow on the floor, and it makes his voice seem disembodied and God-like, coming from nowhere. Donna never really looks at him, either, so I have no real sense of where he is sitting in the room other than behind the camera somewhere. Donna looks at Susie all the time.

“Are you going to ask me personal things?” She has a lisp, and her accent is all over England. One minute she’s from London, the next she’s from Newcastle. I thought she was from Leicester.

“No,” says Susie in a soothing voice, “nothing terribly private.”

“Good. Good. I don’t want to talk about my Andrew, either.” She shivers with excitement. “I can’t wait to meet him.”

“I want to ask you about your attraction to Andrew and what made you write to him in the first place. Then I want to ask you about your feelings. Will that be all right?”

Donna shrugs and pulls her hair over her face. “S’pose.” Her line of sight falls slightly, and I can tell from the moving shadow on the floor that Susie has just sat down. Only the shadow of her head is still visible.

“Okey-dokey,” says Susie jovially, and Donna smiles again. “When did you first hear about Andrew Gow?”

“I saw him in the papers.”

“You saw his photograph?”

“Yeah, the one where he’s got the green jacket on. The one with the beard.” (I realize suddenly that this is how Susie knew which photo Donna had seen of Gow; this is why she wrote “Donna’s first view of G” on it and told the guy in GLT about it. I feel I’m really making sense of things, as if I’m finally breaking the back of the materials in this study.)

“And you liked that picture, did you?”

Donna rubs her leg and glances guiltily at the camera. “Yeah. I thought he looked kind.”

Susie pauses. “You see, not everyone would take that out of that photograph. To a lot of people he might look a bit scary.”

Donna smiles a little. “Not to me.”

“Do you think he wanted to look kind in the photograph?”

Donna thinks about it. “Hmm. No, probably not, really.”

“How do you think he wanted to look?”

She thinks about it, but I can tell she’s a bit bored and doesn’t really care. “Handsome?”

Susie makes a noncommittal noise and moves on. “What was happening in your own life at the time when you saw the photograph?”

“Oh.” Donna flattens the skirt down over her knees and bows her head. “My divorce was just through, and then my dad died.” She laughs unhappily.

“And how did that make you feel?”

“Dunno. Bit sad? Dad was a bastard and hit us from when I was a bairn… so… it wasn’t all bad, and the divorce was good.”

Tucker interjects. “But you looked after your father? You and your husband lived with him?”

Donna points her chin in Tucker’s direction but keeps her eyes down. “Yeah. Then I put him out and stayed on myself.”

“You must have felt some affection for your father, then?”

“Yeah, dunno.” She turns back to Susie, clearly her preferred interviewer. “Where did you get those shoes?”

Susie is thrown. “Oh,” she says. “Um… Shoe Nation, I think.”

Donna grins and nods. “They’re very nice.” She sits forward, leaning out of frame. “I like that color of brown. Have you polished them up or…?”

“No, they’re patent leather. They’re always that shiny.”

Donna sat back, filling in the screen again. She looks at Susie and there is a pause.

Susie has spotted the fact that Donna shifted the subject from her father and moves on. “Where do you see your relationship with Andrew going?”

It would be a loaded question for a woman who was in love with Gow, but Susie’s voice is steady and my heart leaps. I rewind and watch that bit over and over again until the nuances of her voice are completely lost to me. Truthful, not fucking him, and possibly not even loving him. This has been a great couple of days.

Donna shrugs, and Susie rephrases the question. “Have you thought how difficult it would be if you spent your lifetime visiting this prison? You might have to move up here.”

“I’ve already moved here.” I can see their surprised reactions reflected in her face: she smiles and nods. “Yeah,” she says, almost surprised herself, “I’m renting a house in Lenzie.”

(This is a real estate agent’s lie. The house is in Kirkintilloch, not in Lenzie at all. Lenzie is nearby and twice as posh.)

Susie’s voice is incredulous. “But you haven’t even met him yet. Why did you do that?”

“Because I love him,” Donna says. “I know in my heart that Andrew is an innocent man.”