Rick Mofina - Whirlwind

Again.

Her father’s standing at the doorway hurling her clothes into the street. “Get out of my house! You’re a tramp just like your mother!” The nurse at the Social Services office tells Remy she has options. The agency helps her get an apartment and a part-time job at a burger place. Then she gives birth to a baby girl and gives her up. “You’ve given the new parents such joy,” the nurse tells her. The baby is in a good, loving home.

Now, sitting at the park, Remy wiped the tears away, remembering how she’d drifted from job to job, man to man. She was working as a supermarket cashier in Lufkin and feeling lonely when one of the other girls told her about a prison pen-pal website. That’s how she found Mason Varno. It was fate that brought her to him. His eyes in the picture on the website were the saddest she’d ever seen. They broke her heart, but they told her that she and Mason were meant for each other.

They shared dreams.

Remy would do anything for him. Mason told her of his goal to start a carpentry business, how she could help him, how they could start a family, a real family together. Remy saw the ad to be a surrogate. She’d been pregnant before and hadn’t kept the baby. She could do it. She could handle it. She called the number and took the chance to earn sixty thousand dollars. It would give her and Mason a new life.

Remy would be doing a good thing.

The people at the agency were nice, so professional. They checked her health, explained how they were a global agency, and after she signed the agreement, they flew her to Moscow for the procedure because they had special arrangements with doctors there.

The agency assured her that it was all perfectly legal.

Remy became pregnant and throughout her early months she wondered about who the Russian father was-was he kind, smart, handsome? She wondered about her baby’s future parents.

At night Remy was plagued by nightmares of the baby she’d aborted, memories of the horrible sound of the doctor working inside her, the awful hollow feeling. She also had strange dreams about the daughter she gave up, and her surrogacy.

Am I doing the right thing?

When Mason was released from Hightower he was still pleased about the sixty thousand dollars, but something beneath the surface was wrong. Sex for them was not good because of Mason’s ambivalence about “doing it when you got a baby in there.” Being locked up all this time, he was frustrated. Remy had promised him sex would be better after the baby, but Mason was stressed about his new job, his parole and his old enemies.

He started taking drugs again.

She pleaded with him to stop and tried to help him.

Then something inside her went wrong, something with the baby. It was stillborn. Dead inside her. A boy.

Oh, God .

She roiled with intense shock and pain. At the small hospital they’d gone to, the doctors, the nurses, even Mason, all tried to console her.

She wanted to hold her baby. He was so tiny. He looked like he was asleep. She bathed him, dressed him and took a lock of his hair. The nurses made hand and footprints for Remy to keep.

Then the hospital arranged for a chaplain to help Remy and Mason with a funeral and burial in a small corner of a local cemetery. The funeral home provided a tiny coffin at no cost.

Standing over her baby’s grave at the cemetery, Remy was overcome. Why did this happen? Why am I being punished?

Later, a counselor and doctor at the hospital talked to Remy about the changes her body would go through, how her breasts would fill with milk, about the soreness, about her anguish. They cautioned her about the likelihood of facing acute postpartum depression, even psychosis. They provided her with medication, which she never took.

Remy and Mason went back to their apartment in Lufkin, gathered their things and left. Mason told his boss there were complications and they needed to go away for a while. Mason didn’t breathe a word of the truth to anyone because he and Remy didn’t want the agency to know that she’d lost the baby.

But in the aftermath, Remy became confused and conflicted.

As they moved from one cheap motel to another they struggled with the loss and its consequences. There was little they could do as Remy dealt with her growing sense of isolation. No one could understand what she was going through as feelings of futility and emptiness consumed her.

There were moments, rapturous fleeting moments, when Remy saw her dream come true, moments when she’d be living it with Mason in their little house with their children, their family while he ran his carpentry shop.

Then reality smashed it all to pieces.

Now that she’d lost the baby, she was at risk of losing everything.

Why?

Why was she being punished when there were so many bad mothers out there?

Remy saw them in parks, at public plazas, at malls, neglecting their children, not taking care of them properly.

It’s so unfair. It’s not right. She should make it right. That’s the answer.

That’s the solution-the creed she and Mason followed.

Whatever life takes from you, you take back.

To see her dream come true Remy had to rescue a neglected child to replace the one she’d lost, to give it to the agency so she could start her life, her real life with Mason. They’d searched malls and parks, until she found the right baby at the flea market and bravely set out to rescue him.

The tornado was biblical-a whirlwind-a sign.

Now, looking down at Caleb, she smiled.

You didn’t die. I didn’t steal you. I saved you from a terrible mother who does not deserve you. I deserve you. You’re so beautiful, like an angel. Just having you, holding you these days has filled my emptiness You’re like my son, the son I carried, my sweet, beautiful, lost angel .

She reached into her bag for a special tiny jewelry box, opened it and took out a small folded corner of cloth cut from the blanket her stillborn son was buried in. She touched it to her face.

You need me. I need you. I’m not sure I can give you up .

A shadow fell over Remy and the baby.

Mason was standing over them.

“I was looking everywhere for you. Why did you run off?”

Remy said nothing.

“Is everything okay?” he asked, glancing around, impatient.

She shook her head.

“Have you seen the news? The latest news about the FBI?” he asked.

She shook her head.

“Did you have one of your spells?”

“I think so,” Remy said. “Look at him, Mason. He’s so sweet, a sweet little angel. He needs me, doesn’t he?”

Mason paused a moment, assessing Remy. “Yes, he does. He needs you to take care of him, to give to the mom the agency has waiting for him. She’s probably very worried after waiting for such a long time. What do you think, Remy?”

She stared at Caleb, saying nothing.

“Darlin’…” Mason lowered himself to her and softened his voice. It had been a long time since he called her that. She loved it when he did. “Darlin’, the FBI is looking for us. They just put out sketches that look like us on the news.”

Remy blinked at Mason. She was working to understand.

“We have to go now,” he said. “We have to haul it back to the motel, get our stuff and go, now! I’ve got us a place with an old friend from Hightower where we can be safe and make our call to the agency. We can close the baby deal and then start living our dream like you always wanted. Okay?”

Remy looked into his eyes. “No, Mason.”

“No?”

“I don’t think it’s a good idea to stay with one of your ex-convict pals. I don’t trust them.”

“Are you hearing me right?”