Gregg Hurwitz: You're Next

Kat hopped into the back and stuck her nose in a book, the usual morning procedure.

Pulling out of the driveway, Mike gestured at the roof-mounted TV/DVD player. ‘Stop reading. Check out the TV. It’s got wireless headphones. Noise-canceling.’

He sounded like the brochure, but couldn’t help himself; the new-car smell was making him heady.

She put on the headphones, clicked around the channels. ‘Yes!’ she said, too loud since the volume was cranked up. ‘ Hannah Montana .’

He coasted up the quiet suburban streets, tilting down the sun visor, thinking about how nervous and yet excited he was about today’s photo shoot with the governor. They passed a jewelry shop, and he looked at all the glimmering ice in the storefront window and thought that once that wire hit, just maybe he’d stop by and get something to surprise Annabel.

As they neared Dr Obuchi’s, Kat’s face darkened, and she tugged off the headphones. ‘No shots,’ she said.

‘No shots. It’s just a checkup. Don’t freak out.’

‘As long as there are no needles, there will be no freaking out.’ She extended her hand with a ceremony beyond her years. ‘Deal?’

Mike half turned, and they shook solemnly. ‘Deal.’

‘I don’t believe you,’ she said.

‘Have I ever broken a promise to you?’

‘No,’ she said. ‘But you could start.’

‘Glad to see I’ve built up trust.’

Her mouth stayed firm for the rest of the drive and all the way into the examination room, where she shifted back and forth on the table, the paper crinkling beneath her as Dr Obuchi checked her reflexes.

The doctor finished the physical and eyed Kat’s chart. ‘Oh. She never got her second MMR, since Annabel wanted me to spread out the vaccines.’ She tugged at a lock of shiny black hair. ‘We’re late on it.’ She fussed in a drawer for the vial and syringe.

Kat’s eyes got big. She stiffened on the table and directed an imploring stare at her father. ‘Dad, you swore .’

‘She prefers to get ready for shots,’ Mike said. ‘Mentally. A little more notice. Can we come back later in the week?’

‘It’s September. Back to school. You can guess what my schedule looks like.’ Dr Obuchi took note of Kat’s glare. Unwavering. ‘I might have a slot Friday morning.’

Mike clicked his teeth together, frustrated. Kat was watching him closely. He put his hands on his daughter’s knobby knees. ‘Honey, I’m wall-to-wall with meetings Friday, and Mom has class. It’s my worst day. Let’s just do this now and get it over with.’

Kat’s face colored.

Dr Obuchi said, ‘It’s just a prick. Over before you know it.’

Kat tore her gaze from Mike and looked at the wall, her breath quickening, her arm almost as pale as the latex glove gripping it. Dr Obuchi dabbed some alcohol on Kat’s biceps and readied the needle.

Mike watched, his discomfort growing. Kat kept her face turned away.

As the stainless-steel point lowered, Mike reached out and gently stopped the doctor’s hand. ‘I’ll make Friday work,’ he said.

Mike drove, chomped Juicy Fruit, and tried to keep from checking in with the bank manager for the fourth time that morning. As they approached Kat’s school, he rolled down the window and spit his gum into the wind.

‘ Dad .’

‘What?’

‘That’s not good for the environment.’

‘Like if a bald eagle chokes on it?’

Kat scowled.

‘Okay, fine,’ he said. ‘I won’t spit any more gum out the window.’

‘Snowball the Last Dying Polar Bear thanks you.’

He pulled up to the front of the school, but she just sat there in the backseat, fingering the wireless headphones in her lap. ‘You’re getting some award thing for the green houses, aren’t you?’ she asked. ‘From the governor?’

‘I’m being recognized, yeah.’

‘I know you care about nature and stuff, but you’re not, like, really into it, right? So why’d you build all these green houses?’

‘You really don’t know?’ He angled the rearview so he could see her face.

She shook her head.

He said, ‘For you.’

Her mouth came open a little, and then she looked away and smiled privately. She scooted across and climbed out, and even once she was halfway across the playground, he could see that her face was still flushed with joy.

Letting the breeze blow through the rolled-down window, he took in the scene. A few teachers were out supervising the yard. Parents clustered among the parked cars, arranging play dates, coordinating car pools, planning field trips. Kids whooped and ran and tackled one another on the grass.

It was a life he’d always dreamed about but barely dared to believe he could have for himself. And yet here it was.

He dialed, raised the cell phone to his face. The bank manager sounded a touch impatient. ‘Yes, Mr Wingate. I was about to call. I’m pleased to tell you that the wire came through just this instant.’

For a moment Mike was rendered speechless. The phone sweaty in his grip, he asked for the amount. And then asked the bank manager to repeat it, just to make sure it was real.

‘So the loan is paid off now, yeah?’ Mike said, though he knew he had just received enough to close out the remaining debt five times over. ‘Fully paid off?’

A note of amusement in the man’s voice. ‘You are free and clear, Mr Wingate.’

Mike’s throat was tightening, so he thanked the manager and hung up. He tipped his face into his hand and just breathed awhile, worried he might lose it here in the middle of the Lost Hills Elementary parking lot. It was the money, sure, but it was so much more than that, too. It was relief and pride, the knowledge that he’d taken a gamble and put nearly four years of nonstop effort behind it, and now his wife and daughter would never have to worry about having a roof over their heads and food in the refrigerator and overdue tuition bills tucked into the desk blotter.

Across the playground, her image split by the cross-hatching of the chain-link fence, Kat climbed to the top of a fireman’s pole and dinged the top bar with a fist. The sight of her made his heart ache. Her safe little world, composed of small challenges, open horizons, and boundless affection.

Late for work, he sat and watched her play.

The workers clustered around Mike’s truck as soon as he pulled onto the job site.

‘Whew-wee!’

‘Boss got a new vee -hicle.’

‘What’d this baby run ya?’

Mike climbed out, waving off the questions to hide his discomfort. He’d never fully adjusted to being a boss and missed the easy camaraderie that came from working beside the guys day after day. ‘Not as much as you think.’

Jimmy leaned on the hood with both hands, one fist gripping a screwdriver.

Mike said, ‘Watch the paint,’ and immediately regretted opening his mouth.

Jimmy put his hands in the air, stickup style, and the others laughed.

‘All right, all right,’ Mike said. ‘I deserve that. Where’s Andrés?’

His irritable foreman trudged over, stirring a gourd with a stainless-steel straw. The gourd held yerba maté, and the straw – a bombilla – filtered out the loose leaves so Andrés could suck the bitter tea all day without spitting twigs. He shooed the workers off. ‘Well, what you wait for? You supposed to loaf when the boss leave , not when he show up.’

The workers dispersed, and Andrés set down his maté gourd on the truck’s bumper. ‘Aargh,’ he said without inflection.

‘Aargh?’

‘It is National Talk Like a Pirate Day. What a country. All these holiday. Take Your Kid to Work Day. Martin Yuther King Day.’